Do you agree or disagree
with the following statement: It is often not a good idea to move to a new city or a new country
because of the loss of old friends?
I tend to agree that moving to a new city
or a new country is often not a good idea because of the loss of old friends.
First, lossing(losing) old friends often makes us upset.
When we move to a new circumstance, everything is new to us. We may feel lonely
more often. Isolation is not good for us. I have a friend who left his city
many years ago. He had been a(an)
outgoing guy, but when I met him again last year, I found that our conversation
was more likely to be in silence. So I think that move(moving?) to a new country will affect your affection.
You can’t call your friends out for a party or just chat with them face to
face. It used to seem(seemed?
Seemed to be?) so common. It may be very difficult for you to be accustomed to.
Second, you can’t get help conveniently. You’ll
be helpless. Sometimes you want to ask your friends for help, but they are far
away from you. Apparently, it is easier for one to ask an acquaintance for help
than ask a stranger. When you have some serious and complex task, you will
especially miss your good friends. If you haven’t made the dicision(decision) that move(moving?) to a new
city or a new country, they would come to your home and help you sincerely.
Third, this will hurt your friends.
Friendship is not only an(a)
unidirectional relationship. You can get relief from your friends, and
simultaneously, your friends also depend on you. Your departure may make them
sad. You may feel lonely in the strange land, at the same time, your friends
may also missing you. Your dicision(decision)
is actually a selfish dicision(decision).
Overall, moving to a new city or a new
country is often not a good idea because of the loss of old friends. If you are
facing this choice, you should think it carefully.
括号里是我能发现的语法错误或者拼写错误。由于语法课我基本都是睡觉过去的所以至今我还搞不懂主谓一致之类的有关时态的语法。
语法方面挺不错的，虽然感觉有点不自然，不过正常。这篇文章算是让我对天朝的高中的学习又多了份了解吧。其实吧，中国教的语法应该是很好的（除去不听课因素），毕竟我们把语言这种艺术学成了技术，把理科这种技术学成了艺术。不过我们在如何“真正地学外语”上实在太渣了，但相比之下美国教外语（相对于美国人而言）教起来也很傻X，所以可能学外语一开始就是这么傻X吧。
另外，我才知道原来托福作文体裁也是像SAT的一样啊，也是一句话然后你支持与否。
我四月份可能也会去考托福。非常遗憾，被逼着了。完全没准备，也不打算准备。看看裸考能不能上85吧。
You may feel lonely in the strange land, at the same time, your friends
may also missing you.
这句话有语法错误，根据我的经验，at the same time不能当连词用。而且，your friend may also miss you.
楼上的friend漏了个s...
装逼时间：lonely可以换成solitary来装逼。
好了我去做作业了…
谢谢你的意见。
事实上我不知道你知不知道，反正我才是前几天听老师讲的，托福作文是电脑改的，人工核查时只有2%的作文会改分。据说这个系统托福做得比SAT好多了。
托福真心屌，我那破日语全选择题至今还没有出成绩。
不清楚，不了解。